Author name: Adrian

In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory… At Charlie’s house the sun was out but it was still covered with snow and the temperature was cold. In front of Mr. Willy Wonka’s Factory, many people were standing in front of his Factory. They were very excited to see the Ticket holders go in. There were many people. It was just before 10 o’clock. It was very tremendous. Many people were pushing and shoving their way, and the policemen kept pulling them back. I like the part where all the people were very excited to see the Ticket holders go in. It was outside. They got a chance to see what was inside. It was very loud, and exciting, and very wonderful. But only 1 time. Most of the people wanted to look for a long time or look in for 3 times. There were lots of yelling. I do not like the part where the policemen had to pull the people back. It was also outside. But they were shouting: PLEASE LET US STAY WE WANT TO SEE! at the same time. They said it 4 times. 2 of the times inside. And 2 outside. There were more than 106 people.

In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory… In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory Charlie cried MOTHER MOTHER MOTHER!!! He ran in the old grandparent’s room and showed them his Golden Ticket. His mother was making the grandparents their soup. Then as soon as Grandpa Joe lifted up to see he jumped up and said YIPEE. He spilled his soup on Grandma Josephine. He was so excited. He was so excited he ran to tell Mr. Bucket and Mrs. Bucket. I like the part where Charlie really wanted his mother to see his Ticket. He was super super excited. With a big smile. Very big. He ran as fast as he could to show. Then his mother said slow down. But Charlie didn’t listen to his mother, he kept on running. I do not like the part where Grandpa Joe almost spilled his soup on Grandma Josephine. It was in their room. The bowl also almost cracked. He was very very very excited. He made a very big big smile. A very big smile. He was as happy as it was valentine’s day.

In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory… Charlie found the last Golden Ticket. It was in one of the Chocolate bars. He found it when he tore the wrapper off. The Shopkeeper gave it to him. He was so excited. Everybody came running over to see it when the Shopkeeper yelled: EVERYBODY COME SEE THIS LITTLE BOYS GOLDEN TICKET!!! Then the Shopkeeper said to Charlie to run home and show it to his family. I like the part where Charlie found the last Golden Ticket. Everybody liked it. They were all very surprised. Even Charlie. The Shopkeeper was very fat looking. He was also very happy. He was happy all the time. I do not like the part where the Golden Ticket was in one of the Chocolate bars. It was in a Chocolate store. All the Chocolate taste so good. The whole room was full of yummy smells when Charlie went in. Charlie was very very surprised when he first smelled the yummy smells. He was super glad. The Shopkeeper was pleased to meet Charlie.

In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory… It was snowing at Charlie’s house. Snowing so hard that nobody could go outside. Not even in the car. It came into the house. Here’s their ideas they tried to push and slam and lock the door very tight. But nothing worked. Not even their ideas. I like the part where they tried many ways to keep the doors closed. They even tried good ways for little storms. Like putting many things in front of the door. The tried putting 10 chairs and more. They did it up to 16 chairs. Because they only had 16 chairs. They had 1 extra chair, but Mrs. Bucket was Writing Charlie’s friend a letter. I do not like the part where it was snowing so hard. It was very very very very very very very hard. It was a snowstorm. Nobody liked it. They tried to stay in a very hot place. Like in the closet or in the basement or in the attic. But nothing not even 1 idea worked so they tried many many different ways.

In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory… Charlie and Grandpa Joe still wanted to get that ticket. They tried many ways. First Grandpa Joe wanted a Chocolate bar from Willy Wonka. So, Charlie took Grandpa Joe’s coins and then stared at each other for a little while. Then Charlie took the coins and ran to the closest store he could find. Then he asked the waiter for a Chocolate bar. So, the waiter gave him a Chocolate bar. I like the part where Charlie got Grandpa Joe a Chocolate bar. It was because he was hungry. Grandpa Joe was very happy when Charlie gave him the bar. Grandpa Joe said thank you. And Charlie said you’re welcome after. Everybody else was asleep. Just Charlie and Grandpa Joe were awake. I do not like the part where Charlie and Grandpa Joe stared at each other. Then Grandpa Joe smiled. Charlie was happy to. But he just loved his family. Then he also smiled. Then he fell on the bed with Grandpa Joe. Then they were tired and went to sleep.

In Charlie and the Chocolate Factory… Grandpa Joe told Charlie about the Factory. Mr. Willy Wonka’s Factory was all made out of chocolate. Even the inside was made out of chocolate. The walls, pictures, windows, bricks, and beds. It was so amazing. It was like the whole palace was made out of chocolate. And it was. I like the part where the whole palace was made out of chocolate. It was at the Factory. The palace was the Factory. It was so exiting when Grandpa Joe and Grandma Josephine went there. Joe was 4 years old. Josephine was 7. Charlie was a baby in Mrs. Bucket’s belly. I do not like the part where the whole Factory was made out of chocolate. Mr. Willy Wonka wanted the Indian Prince to eat the chocolate. But the Indian Prince said ‘No. But Mr. Willy Wonka was right. Because the whole palace melted in summer. And it was summer. Mr. Willy Wonka did not get all covered in chocolate because he was standing away from the palace, but the prince did, she was inside sleeping.

In The Mouse and the Motorcycle… Keith loved how Ralph brought the aspirin. Ralph’s family was so proud of him. Then Keith went to nap. When he woke up Matt was in the room waiting for him to wake up. When Keith woke up, he couldn’t believe his eyes. Matt brought back his ambulance and his motorcycle. Ralph wanted to keep the Motorcycle forever and his mother said if he wears the crash helmet and rides it correctly and at the right time and ralph did what she said and after all it was his. I like the part where the Motorcycle was Ralph’s. He was so excited. So excited he jumped on the motorcycle and rode it super-fast he spun around in circles. But promised to hold on tight. Because Keith told him. So, Ralph holed on very tight. Even tighter than he was supposed to. I do not like the part where Keith went to nap. Ralph had to stop. Ralph was so disappointed. When Keith woke up Ralph was so excited to ride the motorcycle. But it was time for Keith to go. But Ralph could go to. Keith said Ralph could ride it anywhere.

In The Mouse and the Motorcycle… Ralph found Keith an aspirin. But Ralph wanted to go somewhere else, so Keith opened the door. Ralph went to the forest. He had to escape the man with the dog. So, he asked Keith for his ambulance. But when he went into the elevator the floor was cracked. The ambulance got stuck then Ralph pulled it out then he escaped the dog because the dog went back to Room 211 with the man. I like the part where Ralph pulled the ambulance out of the crack. It was in the elevator. He tried to stay around it but then he tilted and fell. Ralph tried to pull with all his might and strength. He ran out of breath 3 or 4 times. After each time he ran out of breath he rested. Ralph pulled it out when the crack grew bigger. I do not like the part where the ambulance got stuck. It was in the 7th elevator. When the crack grew bigger Ralph stretched more further. Ralph did not like it. He holed on to the floor tight. Then Ralph used his claws and finally he got out. But he wanted to go back to the mousehole.

In The Mouse and the Motorcycle… Ralph wanted to go out and look for an aspirin. But his mother said no you’re too short. But Ralph left the mousehole. Then he looked for an aspirin. He searched and searched in Room 215 and 216 and 211 and finally found it in Room 209. But then he got trapped. Mary Lou trapped him. I like the part where Ralph went to go find an aspirin. He squeezed under the door of Room 215. Then he looked the whole 1st floor. Then he crawled up the stairs to the second floor. The second floor was Room 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 and 211. His favorite room was Room 205. Because of the flowers with the best smell he ever smelled. I do not like the part where Mary Lou trapped Ralph. Ralph was sad. He tried to push the glass out of Mary’s hand, but she was holding it too tight. Ralph tried many ways to get out, but Mary Lou kept holding it. He tried bigger ways, but he was not strong enough. Ralph was trapped. But he did not like it.

Ralph was sad and lonely that night. His mother said to clean up after the family reunion. But Ralph did not want to clean up. For breakfast ralph wanted toast and a jelly sandwich. Then he talked to the family about why Uncle Lester and his mother didn’t want normal food. Then Ralph told them. Aunt Dorothy kept telling Uncle Lester and Ralph’s mother to stop talking while Ralph is talking. I like the part where Ralph told them why they couldn’t eat normal food, but they could. It was they could not eat food but just not poisonous food. And it was not poisonous. But his mother thought it was. So Ralph also told them why. While he was talking Keith said breakfast time. Everybody was exited. I do not like the part where Ralph had a bad night. Everybody was sad. Ralph did not feel good. He was tired and sick and very hungry. But they couldn’t eat until breakfast. Ralph could not wait. His family tried to make him feel better.